Working Title Redwoods – for The-Bat 1 Comment / WIP post / By caitlinbrenner Toggle The SummonsDid You Miss Me?The DreamsBobOutlineSurpriseThe BusThe Second BusWeclome Home (Second Dream in the forest) Sorry, but you do not have permission to view this content.
Ooh, I want more! Already invested in Devin as a character. The promise of more supernatural stuff is great…I like a break from reality.
Couple little grammatical/punctuation tweaks I’d suggest but minor. (My copy editor brain can’t help it!)
The dream section almost feels like an entirely different story and I love that. Great tone, builds suspense.