Promised you feelings, so…
I could feel Dean’s internal turmoil during the review – his inner monologue, the way stuttered at the “friendly”, the struggle to keep the mask on and keep up the conversation… It’s an uncomfortable situation and it felt as such.
That short “entire world” made me gasp inside, it just felt so… profound and grounding.
I really like how flawlessly rational Castiel is, even when talking about feelings. He’d be the infuriating “always right” kinda parent 😅
Dean’s self-punishment is almost heart-breaking when I think about it… I can understand where it’s coming from, yet I’m also more than on board with Cas’s position – I was nodding all along his take on it, muttering “exactly” to myself 😅
wegorka
1 year ago
“War games” feels really dynamic, even though it all happens around the table. The action feels quick, maybe because it forces me to think fast, to be able to keep up with it? Having to switch between few characters while trying to keep up with their verbal and non- verbal conversations made me go back few times to make sure I got their meaning and intentions right. The whole multi-layered exchange is very sharp, very smart, at times it requires the reader to fill the gaps for themselves. It actually might be too sharp and smart for some, tbh 🙈 I guess adding notes to explain some stuff should do the trick (example: I understand the weight and implications of IPO but it will go over many ppl’s heads).
wegorka
1 year ago
Cas and Alex having a heart to heart, both being so open and honest… my face must’ve been oscillating between this: 🥺 and this: 🥹 lol
wegorka
1 year ago
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Ahh, took me a second to remember the sweet deal Sammy got himself here! I’ve not read any fic with such an idea, it’s definitely a bonus! 🙂
Even though Sammy’s the center character of this chapter, Cas leaves his mark here… My sweet, sweet Cas, I love him so much! I could never tire of his dry humor, his commanding persona… Even though it’s Dean trying to “wipe his smug smile off his face”, Cas ALLOWS it, till Dean wants more 👌 It’s a short sentence, easy to be almost lost if you’re focused on Sam’s story, but it gives me/reminds me of the essence of their dynamic and I’m here for it!
Promised you feelings, so…
I could feel Dean’s internal turmoil during the review – his inner monologue, the way stuttered at the “friendly”, the struggle to keep the mask on and keep up the conversation… It’s an uncomfortable situation and it felt as such.
That short “entire world” made me gasp inside, it just felt so… profound and grounding.
I really like how flawlessly rational Castiel is, even when talking about feelings. He’d be the infuriating “always right” kinda parent 😅
Dean’s self-punishment is almost heart-breaking when I think about it… I can understand where it’s coming from, yet I’m also more than on board with Cas’s position – I was nodding all along his take on it, muttering “exactly” to myself 😅
“War games” feels really dynamic, even though it all happens around the table. The action feels quick, maybe because it forces me to think fast, to be able to keep up with it? Having to switch between few characters while trying to keep up with their verbal and non- verbal conversations made me go back few times to make sure I got their meaning and intentions right. The whole multi-layered exchange is very sharp, very smart, at times it requires the reader to fill the gaps for themselves. It actually might be too sharp and smart for some, tbh 🙈 I guess adding notes to explain some stuff should do the trick (example: I understand the weight and implications of IPO but it will go over many ppl’s heads).
Cas and Alex having a heart to heart, both being so open and honest… my face must’ve been oscillating between this: 🥺 and this: 🥹 lol
Ahh, took me a second to remember the sweet deal Sammy got himself here! I’ve not read any fic with such an idea, it’s definitely a bonus! 🙂
Even though Sammy’s the center character of this chapter, Cas leaves his mark here… My sweet, sweet Cas, I love him so much! I could never tire of his dry humor, his commanding persona… Even though it’s Dean trying to “wipe his smug smile off his face”, Cas ALLOWS it, till Dean wants more 👌 It’s a short sentence, easy to be almost lost if you’re focused on Sam’s story, but it gives me/reminds me of the essence of their dynamic and I’m here for it!